Under the same sun and moon

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She promised to herself, that she will be happy and admit that he cannot be by her side. Falling in love with him was unplanned. All alone screaming in her mind “I need you, I want you, and I love you”.  Something has really changed about her that day; something broke after he left her. She put up walls to keep new friends from getting too close, and pushed out the people on the inside to keep herself safe. Within her walls, she was a soldier; no feeling- tranquil and frozen. She could still feel happy. She hid behind her big brown eyes; the same eyes he fell for. No one could see through them like he did. He saw her; who she truly was, what she truly felt, what she wanted, what she needed; he saw her and only her. Now she wears a mask. A guise to how she wanted to be seen, like another face in the crowd, another fish in the sea, just another.  He became her everything, never knew how the change happened.  But every love story doesn’t have a happy ending or effortless happiness. This story was the same. It was not the venom that quenched the legend of Romeo and Juliet, nor was it the icy water that kept Jack from Rose, but it is the distance, the greatest test to see how far love can tour.

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Author: Novemberschild

I write a lot, which keeps me off the streets and out of trouble. There is always something to write about, always a new story to craft. Not writing, for me, is like trying to hold back a sneeze. Learning to write was the most powerful influence in my life. I can still remember the awe I felt when I realized I could put real words onto paper and tell out a story. From that first ‘a-ha’ moment I knew I wanted to write.

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13 thoughts on “Under the same sun and moon

  • September 30, 2016 at 2:21 pm
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    Beautifully described the feelings and the pain both…loved it 🙂

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  • September 28, 2016 at 7:23 pm
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    Wonderful write up, loved the way decided to end it.

  • September 28, 2016 at 2:49 pm
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    Such a beautiful piece of narrative! I loved the last three lines especially where you beautifully used the Romeo and Juliet, Jack and Rose references! Keep writing! 🙂

  • September 27, 2016 at 10:21 am
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    This is so superbly written – I can feel her anguish and can relate to it so well for there is a part of me that went through with something similar…

  • September 26, 2016 at 5:30 pm
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    Lovely read with a strong message. We as a couple had a long distance relationship but it didn’t matter. It only matters when we hide, we cheat and we hurt- distance between hearts matter.

  • September 26, 2016 at 12:14 am
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    Heart touching story … can feel her emotions well written 🙂

  • September 25, 2016 at 6:24 pm
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    Distance does kill the love between people.Out of sight is out of mind for many.People just forget affection and love

  • September 25, 2016 at 5:24 pm
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    This is such a touching and brilliantly written piece. I know, how distance hurts.

  • September 25, 2016 at 9:31 am
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    After reading this I remembered these lines from a Stevie Nick’s song “Love’s a hard game to play,
    The heart’s the price you pay.”

  • September 24, 2016 at 11:48 pm
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    that is very true – it is also not the physical distance but the distance that one lets to grow between their hearts.

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