September 19 2018

All murky over the clouds

So brilliant over the tomb

You poke invisible flames about the sky

Heavy! The thought never ends

So heavy near the sea

I excrete bright thoughts among the tomb

Be wary! The birth is no more

All murky over the clouds

You dispel invisible tentacles over the fire

Be luminous. The life has come

trusting awake

blurring at the edges

nothing to lose

From what country

the witness

seek shelter

not knowing why

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Posted September 19, 2018 by Novemberschild in category "Prompts

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I write a lot, which keeps me off the streets and out of trouble. There is always something to write about, always a new story to craft. Not writing, for me, is like trying to hold back a sneeze. Learning to write was the most powerful influence in my life. I can still remember the awe I felt when I realized I could put real words onto paper and tell out a story. From that first ‘a-ha’ moment I knew I wanted to write.


  1. By Disha on

    Profound words! With each sunrise the darkness fades and similarly a new life wins over death.

  2. By Sonia Chatterjee on

    I almost felt like I was watching this happen. Your narrative is so vivid. Words fail me as I realize that I have only admiration towards your craft.

  3. By Neha Sharma on

    Lovely poem! You have a way to play with words and weave a beautiful picture.

  4. By Neeraj on

    Such a photographic and intense description of life by taking the cloud as a metaphor over the horizon through the tomb. It’s always a pleasure to delve deep into your mind to know more about the life and the romances within.

  5. By Anurag on


    How can you explain such things with so poetic manner

    Plz teach me

    Simple yet meaningful

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